Last poem for the night. How is this one.?

Question: Last poem for the night!. How is this one!.!?

"malignant"

My heart is a temple,
cold and empty, black abyss!.
I am a poison flower,
taste my night time shade!.

My heart rotten, sour,
it beats malignantly!.
All who dare to love me,
whither and fade away!.

Going mad with rage,
drowning in my tears!.
What new trick is this,
her kiss for me is death!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

So sad and yet so well written!. I guess you think you are an island unto yourself!. I hope you know you have friends who really like your poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very good and absolutely intriguing and so full of pain and sadness!.It's dark and so powerful and i know this is a 10 out of a 10!.Here's a star ' wish i could give you more for this here piece as it is off the hook!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you are a versatile writer!.!.!.!.!.!.!.bring different emotions on the paper beautifully of a lot of people!.!.!.very nice poems!.!.!.!.!.carry on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i really like it alot
i feel the emotion, and i can really connect with it
keep writtingWww@QuestionHome@Com

Just can`t get enough of your poems!. I love"POISON FLOWER"!. Such a contradiction!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I CAN UNDERSTAND HOW YOU FEEL!.I LIKE THE POEM!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

intriguing!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice poem I like it !.!.!.alot the very first line is my favourite!. It sends me to a place!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good!. I think it remids me of vampires, though!.!.!. once you think about it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.
I liked it more the second time I read it!.
Nice work DP:)Www@QuestionHome@Com