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Carved in my flesh
Dominatrix
Insanity's
Manifestation
Rotten
to the core!.
Burnt flesh,
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Carved in my flesh Dominatrix Insanity's Manifestation Rotten to the core!. Burnt flesh, nothingmore!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: very forceful!.!.!.!.any it has a serious imagery makes me think if bondage and submissionWww@QuestionHome@Com hmmm, I usually like a longer, more detailed poem, but this one appeals to me today!. Too tired to read more I suppose!. I think it is the insanity manifestation part!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com YES IT IS INTERESTING!.MAKE IT LONGER IF YOU CAN AND TRY TO BE LESS PESSIMISTIC!.I MEAN THAT YOU CAN PUT A POETIC IMAGE THAT CAN ENHANCE YOUR FEELINGS!.A READER LOVES TO FEEL TWO OR MORE STATES OF EMOTIONS IN A POEM!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Makes me feel like getting a pizza - pepperoni, parsley and pineapple!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Your short poem Is great!. I liked'CARVED IN MY FLESH' the best!. When I was in highschool I carved my name In my arm!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it, especially for a short one!. Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com i like it, especially it's simplicity =]Www@QuestionHome@Com No!.Www@QuestionHome@Com sounds like a zombie movie tagline!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Whoa, very!.!.!.!.shocking, in a "I didn't expect that" way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |