"deafears"
Sleet reigns down on me
Freezing all my sadness
Inside I am lost again
Lost in all my thoughts
Prison of my own creation
I cry to deaf ears
that turn away
I scream to skies
that cannot hear my prayers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Position:Home>Poetry> This poem will be in my compilation book. thanks TD. Is this worthy.?Question: This poem will be in my compilation book!. thanks TD!. Is this worthy!.!? "deafears"
Sleet reigns down on me Freezing all my sadness Inside I am lost again Lost in all my thoughts Prison of my own creation I cry to deaf ears that turn away I scream to skies that cannot hear my prayers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: A short and vivid lament with many meanings!. Well done!. Typo!? rains or reigns!?Www@QuestionHome@Com It's passionate!. It's stirring!. It's so vivid, I can even imagine you standing amidst a deserted snowy landscape as the heavens cry with you!. I love it!. Top-notch work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I personally like it, "I cry to deaf ears that turn away" is cool but for that specific poem could use some work!.!. other than that great poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well, I think you mean rains not reigns but I like your poem!. I really do like it-it's good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Canadian GeeseWww@QuestionHome@Com Its very good steve your writing is always full of depth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |