Love is heat, which is very sweet, love is incomplete, till two lips meet!?

Question: Love is heat, which is very sweet, love is incomplete, till two lips meet!!?

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yes jaanu!.
goody goodyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Not bad - I'd simplfy it, and maybe keep the sweet idea (the "which is" is overly expository in my opinion): Like:

Love is heat, hot sweet heat, incomplete 'til two lips meet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ye i agree, get rid of the very sweet !.!.
You might wana make it

Love is heat
No one can defeat
Love is incomplete
Till two lips meetWww@QuestionHome@Com

Get rid of the very sweet part, it makes no sense and will make the poem better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com