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Question: Tell me what you think of my poem, last 2 verses!?
Come love's tunnel
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Mystery's chimes, girlhood sadly sounds
previous hopes lying, lying on the grounds
yet touched me it did, so grateful the sigh
I could have stayed the same,remain unchanged
melancholy bells have rearranged, why!?
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Welling thoughts this was to have been
before my eyes that were to have seen
succomb to shadows, I can't stop it now
sweet luxury surge, it's me, me, feté
unstemmed feelings that have passed my way!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
that is a nice poem!.!.!.very relaxing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I thought it was good, short, but good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com