Poem - The Bandit - Do You Like?

Question: Poem - The Bandit - Do You Like!?

From the West
he came

A bandit
with a smile
that paralyzes
and corrupts

A bandit
with lyrics
that hypnotize
and erupts

A bandit
showing paths
that actualize
but interrupts

a woman
full of lifeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Marguerite this is HOT!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

when i get up
i dont know if im truly awake
or if im still dreaming

its son easy for me to die
in love with a woman
born in my heart
in my head, in my soul!.

i wish it wouldnt be
so complicated to forgive
so i could live inside
all tears form my dreams

forget about the darkness
inside yourself, for what you
cannot get theres no one
else to bleme

you are not the only one
everybody needs some body
and i want somebody
i want somebody to loveWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is too perfect not to yoink!.!.!.!.

The Butt Pirate
~~~~~~~
From West Hollywood
he came

A rump ranger
with chaps
of leather
and ventilated crotch

A queen
of the strip
in full makeup
how much is too much!?

A winker
milk drinker
a packer
of fudge

A woman
with fake boobiesWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, now I'm craving bandit for breakfast!.!.!.this is an amazing poem with a succinct style that goes straight for the throat!.!.!.and holds on!. In a strictly good way of course!. Loved it, loved it, loved it!. Now I need a home on the range!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's soft, sweet and simple!.!.!.!.!.!.and i like it very much!.!.!.the rhymes 'corrupts, erupts and interrupts' makes it more musical and beautiful!.!.!.very well done indeed!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This saga needs continuance for the woman, full of life, must surely want revenge on this evil bandit from the west! Very unique and very descriptive!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, could be a cool song :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I really do!.!.!.that bandit was someone who interrupted my life!.!.!.I know him, lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is so nice
Without a device!.
I am just a man
without a plan!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I enjoyed it but the woman seems out of place!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it! You compose just as good as you are!.

Thanks for sharing!. Have a great day!Www@QuestionHome@Com

???it
Who wrote it!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is very good!. Just be careful of virtual cowboys!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very well done, Marguerite! I enjoyed reading this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

me likey!!! jk lol i do like it!.!.!. its sort of got a dark air about it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm the Gangster of Love!.!.!.!.LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com