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Question: I wrote a self destructive song/poem a while back , what do you think!?
My wife had just passed on and I needed a place to vent my frustrations with her loss and I felt really self destructive at the time!. But I am much better now!.
Suicide give me a ride,over
Suicide give me a ride,over
Suicide give me a ride right on over to the other side
Suicide give me a ride, over
Suicide give me some help, over
Suicide give me some help, over
Suicide give me some help I need some help in killing myself
Suicide give me some help, over
Suicide give me a gun right now,
Suicide give me a gun right now,
Suicide give me a gun, put it in my mouth and have some fun
Suicide give me a gun, right now!
remember this was 2 years ago when my wife had passed on and I was very pained I used poetry as my therapy!. The world is not so bad now, it helps not to dwell on it so much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Hi Dear Friend,
So Sorry for Your Lose and I can feel your Pain in this Poem!.!.Very Glad you are here with Us and Glad You were able to get threw with such a Big part of Your Life gone My Friend!.!.
Your Friend,
poppy1Www@QuestionHome@Com
This are the ravings of a disturbed soul, full of anguish for his lost soul mate!. I can see you in your loneliness pacing your room, or rocking backwards and forwards on the edge of your bed, a most distraught figure!.
I am pleased that your grief is nearly over!.
RobertWww@QuestionHome@Com
well, I sure am glad that you are emotionally better now, I'm also glad you didn't live out your poem, I hope you are writing now with perhaps a more positive outlook, and I wish you well in your future endeavors, keep up the good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
One must dwell on the here and now!. Your loved one would not have wished for you to take your own life!. Glad you are viewing the world again, in a positive way!. It does get better, believe me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sorry for your loss, and glad your doing alot better now!.It was alright, but thats not the point!.If it helped you through the rough times thats all that matters!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Glad you're better too, but as far as your writing abilities!.!.!.well!.!.!.!.!.it's the same thing over and over, not all that poetic, however, pretty dark obviously!. Sorry about your loss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Maybe it would be a good idea to put this away these are intense thoughts!. I'm so sorry for your loss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i think its the **** if you can right stuff like that use some different situations and you will be a poet in no timeWww@QuestionHome@Com