This is a poem I wrote about someone cheating on her boyfriend?

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Question:

Are you happy in my arms,
When I shield you from world's harms
Or would you rather run to he
To buy you loads of shopping sprees

Will my love ever be enough
Is it to soft, is it too tough
Girl tell me, I need to know
Then perfect love to you I'd show

Am I too tall, too short, too thin
Do you dislike ME, or my grin
Why do you point out all my flaws,
When you're harmful words to me are claws

Girl you ripped, through my heart
I knew I would be here from the start
No, girl, don't be shy
Why don't you rip me 'till I die

Because I don't care
And of course you don't
You're blows I'll bare
But my heart, it won'tWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Max,
This poem does talk about deceiving
because it asks questions about
Are you happy with me or him
The person who is cheating on her boyfriend
does so because of minor imperfections
like too short too tall,
not good looking
Everyone has flaws
life is not perfect!.
Flaws are never an excuse to cheat!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a good poem!.!.!.but!.!.!.!.!.you start with the fact she gos to him!.!.then you go and keep the topic on her hurting you!.The poem seems to be based on the fact she's huting you!.!.and not the title of her heating!.!.!.a good poem but you need a good title for it,that reflects the poem it's self!.!.!.the poem i give an A+!.!.!.!.just relate the title ,and youll be good to go!.Www@QuestionHome@Com