What do you think of this poem? I wrote it as free form or I think this free for

Question: What do you think of this poem!? I wrote it as free form or I think this free form!.!?

I stand amazed that my heart so broken
could mend itself in time and be ready
to love agian!.
Alas, I grieve, but my tears fall short and
soon they fall no more!.
That tender part seeks to find a love
for it can not beat alone!.

I tried to write one that did not rhyme!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Dear poet,

You have succeeded in writing a free verse poem, so you are to be congratulated!. However, this old gent finds it somewhat unusual for you to be still grieving, yet are ready to take on another love!. Perhaps it it consolation you seek rather than another lover!?
"That tender part seeks to find consolation, for it cannot beat alone" would in this writers opinion be better!.
But I go with the majority, you have done well!.

Robert!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a beautiful, reassuring perspective on the healing power of time and of the heart once broken!. It flows nicely and sounds lovely without any rhyme!. I have been trying to write free verse myself and you have inspired me!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was really good!. I could understand EVERYTHING!.
i love the emotion you put into it!. Its sad and powering like you want love!. Which everyone does!. This poem can relate to Millions of people out there!.
Very Nice! i cant wait to read more of your work!.
:)

-karlyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Very well written & sadly true to lifeWww@QuestionHome@Com

its really good : )
sad, but with a hopeful ending!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice! Very sad!.!.!.!.!.i'm gonna cry!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com