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Question: My last poem for the night!. How do you like this free verse!.!?
"sinequanon"


Pale, beyond reproach and refusal
Crowned with thorns, she stands tall
Disregarding all things she sees mortal
Dying by her cold immortal heart
Her languid lips could not taste sweeter
Than any love that fears to greet her
Many men have died with her, no inkling
From every single time and land
Though beautiful, her love is very tainted!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Is she a vampire!? That is the feeling that I get for this lover!. If so, it is an excellent poem and I enjoy vampire and goth works greatly!. I used to publish a lot, but sort of let things slip!. I'm not sure if some of the ezines I published work in are still around!.

Publish somewhere! Don't let the beauty of your works lay dormant on a disk somewhere!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sinequanon!. Wasn't she that Indian gal on the Lewis & Clark expedition!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

This was like a really cool bedtime story for me 2nite as i am very tired, now maybe my dreams will be okay and i will be okay too!. talk 2 u soon!Www@QuestionHome@Com

very deep!.!.and thoughtfulWww@QuestionHome@Com

Love it!.!.!.very good one!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

love itWww@QuestionHome@Com