50th Class Reunion---------Poem critique?

Question: 50th Class Reunion---------Poem critique!?

50th Class reunion

Was he the one
who smiled first -or I
Was he the one
who stole my heart
or did I set it free
Was he the one
who lit our fire of flame
soon cooled to amber glow
ashes scattered by the wind
among young love's fickle wims
Was he the one
That said, "good-bye" or I !?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

w(h)ims in the 3rd to the last line is mispelled but other than that, this is a great whisical "slice o'life" style poem and I love it!. Just my style frankly! :O))
A 10 in my book!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very Good - it almost sounds like they could be lyrics for a song!. I love the "Was he the one That said, "good-bye" or I!? line!. It seems that a "senior moment" has occurred - like did you do that or I!.!.!.!.!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful! It's like reading Danielle Steel's or Judith McNaught's romance novels whereby old flames reunited!. You have compressed hundreds of pages into just a few lines!. Simplicity and accuracy has made this piece impeccable!. Well done! =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have to say, I really like this!.
It's short, it's sweet and it sort of leaves you looking for more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautifully written, Jenny!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice!. Very, very nice!. So, does the girl tell!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

this poem is cool!. Check out www!.poetry!.comWww@QuestionHome@Com