Do you like my poem called Kissing?

Question: Do you like my poem called Kissing!?

girl germs
and boy germs
and some times
girl germs
with other
girl germs
or boy germs
with other
boy germs!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Yes, I thoroughly enjoyed it!. This poem is fantastic!. Beneathe its rather obvious and simple surface, there is a deep, hidden, underlying meaning that is both beautiful and controversial!. It explores the meaning of love and how it can be found with any person, which is a touchy topic to explore, especially in a society that is like today's!.

The poem really strikes the meaning home by using repetition for effect and a deep form of symbolism!. After all, what is love but a germ!? For, both spread and cannot be completely stopped; nor can the problems that they cause be completely cured!.

It also explores the fear that humanity has towards the concept of love and commitment by recalling a simple concept of all children!. This is, of course, cooties (simply referred to as "germs" in this lovely poem)!.

The poem is short, sweet, and to the point!. It is deep and explores one of the most complicated of all human emotions - love!. I only wish there was more!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i understand where you were going but you neever got there!. you just said one like!. its like me saying!.!.!.!. i once saw!.!.!.!. and not finishing!. add more!. we'll see what happens!. [this is just constructive critism so don't get mad] besides the fact that it seems too unfinsished i like the lettering!. but only if yuou are going wqith a type of dialect!. keep up thee good work!. finish the poem and i'll check in with you later!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

umm good but unfinished, also you might need a second or third word to repete throughout the poem!.

look at this poem for me

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That's the best poem I've read on Yahoo Answers!.

But that's not saying much!. And neither does your poem, though it does say it in an unusual way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

no, wait till you grow then write something meaningfull about kissingWww@QuestionHome@Com

No!. But probably just because I'm a germaphob!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

and dumb germs in this poem
and bozo germs in your head

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Yes very sureal!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think its cool!. its interestingWww@QuestionHome@Com

HAHAHA
I like it it's
FUNNYWww@QuestionHome@Com

Well, I guess it's true what they say about a dog's mouth being cleaner [than a humans mouth]!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

no, that's retarded!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

How can you even call this a poem, this sucks!Www@QuestionHome@Com

eeeewwww
cooties !Www@QuestionHome@Com

Um no!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Um!.!.!. No!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry that doesn't work for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

YEA IT'S PRETTY COOL I GUESS!.!.!.
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!.!.!. UH!.!.!.!.!.!.STRANGE!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's different!.!.!.
I don't know!. I don't think I like it, but i've read worse!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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you kinda have a sad life!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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