This is not a good poem its like a ROUGH rough please rate?

Question: This is not a good poem its like a ROUGH rough please rate!?

Your invisible
to other guys
our invincible
to staring eyes

maybe you can see us
your just invisible
it is unjust
that you are invincible

Maybe your not invisible
looks you dont ban
it really could be
invisible i amWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

to be honest with you, i didnt really like it!.
maybe its because you repeated invisible way too many times!.

just start over fresh, and maybe you'll come up with a better poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

9!.95/10 only our invincible to staring eyes is bad which will cost ya !.5 pointsWww@QuestionHome@Com