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Position:Home>Poetry> I'm writnig this at 4:20 in the morning. How is this to start the day.?Question: I'm writnig this at 4:20 in the morning!. How is this to start the day!.!? "success"
I have learned this lesson, you have to feel bad!. Before you feel good again, drown before you breathe!. Open up your eyes to see, takes more than a knife!. To make me even bleed a bit, parasites are set to strike!. Slave enough to stay alive, get your piece of pie!. I don't think it matters, most never do succeed!. Money is the brand new God, it gives you what you want!. When that star starts to fade, you'll find yourself in hell!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: An excellent poem for 4:20, in the morning, however, that time is slightly dubious!. *winks* But your last stanza reveals a truth that is all too true and awful!. Money is the brand new God, but there can be only one!. Who will win out in the modern day society!. Unfortunately, I do not believe that we, as a people, are ready for that kind of faith!. Thank you for chilling us with this truth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A stark and bleak commentary with so much (unfortunate )truth!. This is very well done, really made me think and I appreciate the brilliance of the imagery!. The ending hits very hard!. Great poem!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's very true!. What I wonder is, why do they put "In God We Trust" on money!? Money causes evil!. God is not evil!. It doesn't make sense to me!. Good poem!. -Kara-Www@QuestionHome@Com It's a very good poem!.!.!.!.!.very well written!.!.!.and that last stanza is excellent!.!.!.but are you an atheist or something!? but that's not a problem!.!.!.!.men can be various things!.!.!.!.!. and you are an excellent poet!Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a GREAT poem!.!.Very well written!.!.!.I like the last part the best because many people are soooooo crazy over money and they don't realize it will all fade away!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com 'Parasites are set to strike' ! Where did you come up with that terrific line!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com Oh, cynical!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com very nice poem!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com very cool poem and so true!.!.I LOVED IT MUCH !.Www@QuestionHome@Com |