Destiny
Our hero, rest in peace legendary one
for your place is in waiting, the ends finally come!.
Your existence now depleted a soul has arisen
golden gates open wide set pass by life’s freedom!.
One of life’s treasures sunk to depths of a heart
an end of celebration for your spirit can depart!.
A respective soldier in our hearts you will stay
fond memories fortuned, silenced by your passing everyday
Like a night of jewels expressing light beautifully
shine as I envisage your smile, for it’s a miracle to see!.
May your presence blow with the wind for listeners to hear
break through the clouds as your destiny is near!.
More of my poems are at
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it's amzing!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. love every line of it ^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com
i think its absolutely fantastic!!! wow!. i can find nothing wrong with the words but ( theres always a but, huh!? lol) i find your titles ( yes i read the other one by you too!) are a touch predictible!. instead of calling it destiny you could call it "golden gates" or "depths of a heart" insteadWww@QuestionHome@Com
wow they are great should get them published!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful poem!. I like the line, "May your presence blow with the wind for listeners to hear!.!.!." --Well done and keep it up dude!. Here's one of mine because sharing is caring, i think!. ;)
Me Who
Me, Who
Reigns in the rains
And stares at the stairs
Of broken panes and pains,
Cares about cares!.
Me, Who
Owed many an ode
And seen many scenes,
Rowed in the city road
Of mean by all means!.
Me, Who
Became bolder than a boulder
In stance for instance,
In the cold or the colder
Takes no assistance from assistants!.
Me, who
Found inner sense without dollars and cents,
Mined a peace of mind
Through intense intents
Of a find that can't be fined!.Www@QuestionHome@Com