My poem called 'Dark Moon'?

Question: My poem called 'Dark Moon'!?

Dark Moon

A blackened moon relining your blackened heart
shon down a silver charm monochrome thy
her years of glory eclipsing, rotating,
though shortening, shattering, soon to die!.

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I love poems and this one makes you think about it, it drags you in and you want to read more, keep it up its good :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

Bitterness can be sweet!. Nice write!. Brief and strong!. Creative tone and rhythm!. Write on right on!. Here's a ME ME ME poem i did!.

Me Who
Me, Who
Reigns in the rains
And stares at the stairs
Of broken panes and pains,
Cares about cares!.

Me, Who
Owed many an ode
And seen many scenes,
Rowed in the city road
Of mean by all means!.

Me, Who
Became bolder than a boulder
In stance for instance,
In the cold or the colder
Takes no assistance from assistants!.

Me, who
Found inner sense without dollars and cents,
Mined a peace of mind
Through intense intents
Of a find that can't be fined!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!.!.!.!.dark and lovely!.!.!.!.!.
Good poem! its beautiful and nicely writen!.!.!.
not much ryme but its great the way it is! ^-^
I love it!.!.!.=3 Its siriously A FAVORITE!!! ^-^

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very dark nice!
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