My last poem for the nite. For peeps my age. LOL How is this.?

Question: My last poem for the nite!. For peeps my age!. LOL How is this!.!?

"xstacy"

She's pushing fifty, cracks on her skin
needs to go out, she ready for sin!.!.
Droppin tabs of X, with a guy named Glen
doesn't matter where, as long as there's gin!.

All dolled up and no one to blow
silicone lips!. so big that they glow!.
Old enough to be someone's grandma,
pornograpic shows and marijuana!.!.

The glamorous life is all that you seek,
living in lala land, make believe tweak!.
Stumbling around drinking champagne,
snortin up lines of someone's cocaine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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DP, I know this lady, and a hundred more that could be her!. I think it's sad to watch them be this way, but it is a life of their choosing, at least the ones I know!. They are reaching for something from their youth to belie the fact that they are aging, even if it means a lifetime of addiction and torment!. Trouble is, it's not only women who live this way but many men also!. I think it is a sign of the times!. I expect it to get worse before it can ever get better!. Bout forgot to say so, but you get a star for an excellent poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

dear lady!.your poem is nice!.the woman in your poem is fifty years young and has the right to be happy!.i think a woman her age is neither a grandma nor has cracks on her skin!.the charm of the eyes is not destroyed by years and the embers of seduction remain,veiled by passion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love how these words roll off the tips of your fingers and
into ours eyes!. I can just picture this!. We are all fighting
the same enemy!. That would be "Father Time" Some of us
hold him back a little longer but sooner or later he breakes through!. So I just say,"BRING IT ON"
!.Give me some trolls, I am "HUNGRY"Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, very sad, but also very true now days!. Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

some people just never grow old!. i don't think it's sad, i just thinks it's life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a very good poem describing a person's sad life gone wrong!. A nice peek into her soul!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your ideas are good but it doesn't flow at all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is sad!.
But written good!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Could you introduce me to her!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is sad indeedWww@QuestionHome@Com

hey steve!
Wow!.!.!.!.your descriptions are so clear!.!.!.!.!.i can see so vividly!.!.!.
Sad!.!.!.yes, but full of depth!.!.!.!.i picture her sitting in the corner of a seedy motel, hair mussed up, her color stained lips, and cakes of $!.99 mascara smudged and streaking down her cheeks!.!.!.fly'n up up and away tryin' to escape her reality!.!.!.!.!.
there are many people like her out there young and old alike!.!.!.sad but painfully true!.!. indeed!.!.!.
Makes me want to pray for her and others like her!.
very well doneWww@QuestionHome@Com