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Question: Last one b4 dinner what do u think!.!. Painful to write!.!?
"wish unfullfilled"


Seeing the past in front of me,
longing for something dead!.
Why think of the future,
when it's so far out of reach!.
Sincerity is my intent,
it was found deep down inside!.
Waiting for the crescent moon,
to reside inside your eyes!.
Burning like an angry wound,
each and every single day!.
I stop and smell the flowers,
still running from the pain!.
In the world of distant dreams,
I still pray for reality!.
Your lips become so fervent,
yet you still seem far away!.
Every simple gesture,
I see the lie inside your eyes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Well this one may now be my favorite of yours!.
I can't believe the improvement in your work!.
It was always good, but now!.!.!.!.!.!.amazing!.
Very nice:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes painful as hell

sometimes empathy hurts but i would never give it up

thank you for sharing and for knowing how important it is to stop and smell the flowersWww@QuestionHome@Com

It is always a shock when what we have counted on makes a 180 degree turn!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

oh girl lied huh!? nicely written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's really good!! We can feel your pain!! And the way that you described her, it makes her seem so real!.!.!. So there!! Its really good!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah - for stopping and smelling the flowers!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Painful to read!.
But if you like it!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com