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Twisted arms of twilight, holding tight, to my soul!. In her bright ice blue eyes, dancing right my way!. This exotic perfect maiden, relieves my grieving heart!. Clouds float up in the sky, your eyes peer through my soul Wind softly whispers your name, in the moonless night!. Passion rules my everything, while monarchs flit about!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I keep checking your avatar to make sure its you!. This I also like!. The first two lines are wonderful!. Only critique is clouds float yet in the next stanza you talk about moonless night!. To me you can't see clouds at night without some light from the moon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com But when the butterflies fall will you return into my arms!? When the sweet angels call, will I have lost you forever!? Sorry, I felt the need to answer poetically!. This was beautiful!. I could see the dark, moonless night with the glorious monarch butterflies hovering over the gravestones as two lovers whisper!.!.!."til death do us part!.!.!."Www@QuestionHome@Com I unwittingly erased an entire page of emails!. That's too bad because I never know what to expect from you!. This is hot! I consulted the Board of Directors, Division of Mawkish Sentimentality Control!. They have decided to permit the excessively bathetic "your eyes peer!.!.!.etc!." in view of the overall excellence of the rest of this little gem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is breathtaking, I am tremulous in its brilliance!. I may have never read abetter poem from you because this is extremely deep and also very picturesque in its imagery!. One well-written, lovely stanza leads to another in this poem and the entirety is a thing of beauty!. I am so overwhelmed!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very nice, I like the twisted arms of twilight!. This is a soft flowing, passionate verse, with great imagery!. Note to neonman: He was probably just seeing steam not clouds!.!.!.hehe, and the monarchs were bats!.!.!.!.!. Sorry Steve, just kidding!Www@QuestionHome@Com new dark prince!. well what do you know!? i'm 57!. i knew, i just knew!. please continue the beauty!. my ters flow joyously as i read this lovely poem!. this is poetry!. well done, dark prince!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is such a wonderful and such effortless beauty in this poem!.!.I love the last stanza Wind softly whispers your name in the moonless night while monarchs flit about !.!.Where is this place i want to go asap lol!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's beautiful!. I really like it!. Very nice:)Www@QuestionHome@Com Super intense!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com thats ur best one so far u do these all in a day or are these you done in your life timeWww@QuestionHome@Com |