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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Hi! I am an English teacher, and you are right to be sheepish about your grammar! Don't worry about that part, though!. You write some very nice messages, and a few of your images are strong!. Just based on the feedback of others, though, the general consensus seems to be that they could be better!. I am in agreement!. I would suggest you take some of these poems and work on updating them a little!. Fix the grammar mistakes, but not all the deliberate ones!. That makes your voice!. also, look for weak spots in the poem (where it felt like you were shoving words in to serve a purpose) and revamp them!. Don't forget that free verse poetry still follows some type of order and rhythm- the poet creates it but it must be accessible to the reader!. Don't give up on your writings!. It takes time and willingness to revise to create poetry of worth!. Good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com noWww@QuestionHome@Com no, it sounds more like you're trying to make a rap song!.!. sorry!Www@QuestionHome@Com you lost ur rhythym at the end!. fact second something one!? i dont remeber but it is good, and hey it could even be a rap song!.! haha!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com C+Www@QuestionHome@Com Xanga told me that there was no such page!. But considering what the answers have said- I suppose your poetry is dumb! Sorry!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com you were actually needed to provide the link here!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Thayr Good,But You Sat Too Much "girl" "My Girl" And such!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It'd make a good RnB or rap or somhing, not so much a poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com sorry , but i do believe from my comment and the other's comments , you should STOP writing poetry , simply as u cant and u r not a poetWww@QuestionHome@Com It's good but have you thought about making raps!? They sound more like raps!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Sorry hun, I can't get to it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |