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I have come for her
by TD Euwaite
Comes a rider strange wandering
Painted pony, skins quite rare
What does he want from us
Why is he talking to my father
All the elders understand him
I can't here the words exchanging
He's a tall and handsome man
A different face from foreign lands
Why are all the women crying
And my mother brings me blankets
Why does he now lead two ponies
And why has he held out his hand
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Beautiful finish and one that she awaited !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Are you stealing horses or muses!? Nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is a beautiful sequel to Marguerite's poem!. I applaud you and the gorgeous use of imagery!. Of course, it goes back to a darker time when women were bartered away!. also, yay, a chance to correct a typo, did you mean "here" the words exchanging or actually "hear!?" Just a query!. Loved your beautiful words as always, they stirred my soul!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, it's magnificent!. I have to sit on my hands to prevent myself from explicating it!. It's a word video!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Do not wear that blanket! Do not get on that pony!
You have work to do!.!.!.!.later will be time enough to explore the dark lands!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I like the poem, but the content and imagery saddens me and not just because it was a way of life for them, but it still is in some places!. My favorite line "Why are all the women crying" In my heart I cry for her and others like her situation!. She was just sold to a stranger like tool or a piece of property!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very nice !.!.!.!.!.Pale RiderWww@QuestionHome@Com
Impressive !
I wish I could put words together like that, and so readily!. Maestro!.
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The Earl King!?Www@QuestionHome@Com