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Question:i got them constipation blues (dedicated to charlie paton)

by frank

i ate a bratwurst
and it sure does hurt
looks like it is here to stay

i push so hard
and can't drive a car
it's been hurting all day

and then in a flash
i built up some gas
and blew that stupid turd away

silent butt deadly,
frank

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i got them constipation blues (dedicated to charlie paton)

by frank

i ate a bratwurst
and it sure does hurt
looks like it is here to stay

i push so hard
and can't drive a car
it's been hurting all day

and then in a flash
i built up some gas
and blew that stupid turd away

silent butt deadly,
frank

Same crap, same Frank, talking about it ! LOL :O)))

Funny how things like Bratwurst just don't exit as nicely as the pleasure you get from eating them huh. You keep eating stuff like that and you're gonna blow more than you counted on one of these days! owwwwwweeeee!

And are you trying to set a record for speed of censorship? Hopefully they won't blast you away!

lol whats a bratwurst?

It's too nasty. Did you write it?

Please dont tell that to anyone else something so disgusting should not be told to people

Lol.........I just have to love ya Frank!!
I love it!!
Nice:)

oki, i dont' have email enabled on here so i'm guna tell you about a kyrielle in this question. to avoid the violation: the poem is not to my tastes, thanks but hey it's yours.

KYRIELLE
written either in rhyming couplets, or in quatrains (verses of 4 lines) with a rhyme scheme. the last line of each couple/quatrain is the same every time (e.g. You've split my universe in two)
the lines are usually iambic tetrameter:
-/-/-/-/
where - is an unstressed syllable and / is stressed, so:
you've SPLIT my UniVERSE in TWO
(caps are stressed - more emphasis)
a kyrielle can go on for as long as you like, but the last line of each couplet/quatrain must be the refrain!