lyrics it has a bridge and chorus so i have it as a song?

Question:please rate and comment it with any suggestions... its not great but its by a 13 year old guy so please just check these out

Remember the first time
she stared into your eyes
remember it well
she stared into mine

Those were the days
when we could stop and gaze
without cause
without care
those were the days

Remember the first time
she smiled at you
remember it well
that was your cue

Those were the days
when we could stop and gaze
without cause
without care
those were the days

Those were the days
i wished would last
through the haze
i dawned on my past
i cant have any regrets
but i just cant forget
how those were the days

Remember the first time
your lips met to fast
remember it well
for its not the last

Those were the days
when we could stop and gaze
without cause
without care
those were the days

But now its not like that
in this crazy world
we cant stop and gaze
and ive forgotten that girl

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: please rate and comment it with any suggestions... its not great but its by a 13 year old guy so please just check these out

Remember the first time
she stared into your eyes
remember it well
she stared into mine

Those were the days
when we could stop and gaze
without cause
without care
those were the days

Remember the first time
she smiled at you
remember it well
that was your cue

Those were the days
when we could stop and gaze
without cause
without care
those were the days

Those were the days
i wished would last
through the haze
i dawned on my past
i cant have any regrets
but i just cant forget
how those were the days

Remember the first time
your lips met to fast
remember it well
for its not the last

Those were the days
when we could stop and gaze
without cause
without care
those were the days

But now its not like that
in this crazy world
we cant stop and gaze
and ive forgotten that girl

i love it its awsome and really origanill i cant get it out of my head {im a song writer too and that was really good}

you have this as a song, well put it on air let the world know this.