I wrote this poem because my dad moans over nothing, its lol hope you like it :)

Question:A pointless argument, why do you ramble on
lets call on the peace leave the row its gone!
Sing a new song would you i've heard it before
why get so aggravated by something so small,
You dragged it and stretched it and showed us it all
why keep repeating it your talking to a wall,
Take a deep breath and think about what i said
its really not serious so get it out of your head,
No need to go on about something so small
you've made your point clear now lets drop it all,
Making a fool of yourself, you do it so well
ill fight you with comebacks so cut out the yell!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: A pointless argument, why do you ramble on
lets call on the peace leave the row its gone!
Sing a new song would you i've heard it before
why get so aggravated by something so small,
You dragged it and stretched it and showed us it all
why keep repeating it your talking to a wall,
Take a deep breath and think about what i said
its really not serious so get it out of your head,
No need to go on about something so small
you've made your point clear now lets drop it all,
Making a fool of yourself, you do it so well
ill fight you with comebacks so cut out the yell!

I like it! Yeah you need to put in a lot of commas here and there but yeah, you should read it to him haha
Edit: A reply to the edited version haha i still like it a the commas reminds me of my own dad!

GOOD ONE!i enjoyed reading it.did you show it to your dad?

It is interesting as is but why not make it into a metaphorical poem. For example use a large dog, always barking as you Dad. Challenge yourself to let us view it in a different way.

Nice, my dad does the exact same thing