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Position:Home>Poetry> Would you like to read this ?Question:" EXROCISM " Seething eyes Murky of red Smolder contempt Within a disabled soul Talons slash A tender heart Bloodless scars Left un-healing Twisted smiles Un-veil sadistic lies Weariness weeps For this battles ending Weakness is upon What you prey Defiance nourishes You're Growth _______ So once again we face ,this time in an un-familiar pace.Risen a light of new ! With no strength or weakness left upon which to prey,I approach un-armed.You the coward that you are ,to mug a heartening soul , I now watch you bleed into eternities non-endings. Thus the light Has so risen And sets upon The day of new___ Left with scars un-healing Only perhaps to fade _ _ _ These are mine to bare THE END. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: " EXROCISM " Seething eyes Murky of red Smolder contempt Within a disabled soul Talons slash A tender heart Bloodless scars Left un-healing Twisted smiles Un-veil sadistic lies Weariness weeps For this battles ending Weakness is upon What you prey Defiance nourishes You're Growth _______ So once again we face ,this time in an un-familiar pace.Risen a light of new ! With no strength or weakness left upon which to prey,I approach un-armed.You the coward that you are ,to mug a heartening soul , I now watch you bleed into eternities non-endings. Thus the light Has so risen And sets upon The day of new___ Left with scars un-healing Only perhaps to fade _ _ _ These are mine to bare THE END. A very unique presentation. Your title gives away the poem, perhaps something a little less obvious. The thoughts provoked are far more than the story though, which makes for a good read and a good poem. My compliments. i dont really get it I like it. Nice work:) From one, also slightly so, not to worry...Yes, I'd like to read it...and did! |