A poem i wrote called pick yourself up.?

Question:Pick yourself up
with a tear in your eye,
White blinding light
you breath out a sigh,
Pain felt throughout
by this bewildered one,
Harm has been caused
the damage is done,
Unable to remember
the incident at all,
Lying in the road
curled in a ball,
Superhuman recovery
is the miracle you are,
To be in the accident
but not killed by the car,
Fate played its part
but luck had prevailed,
Fortunate for the individual
he could have been nailed,
A miraculous escape
for this idle fool,
should have been more wary
It could have ended it all.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Pick yourself up
with a tear in your eye,
White blinding light
you breath out a sigh,
Pain felt throughout
by this bewildered one,
Harm has been caused
the damage is done,
Unable to remember
the incident at all,
Lying in the road
curled in a ball,
Superhuman recovery
is the miracle you are,
To be in the accident
but not killed by the car,
Fate played its part
but luck had prevailed,
Fortunate for the individual
he could have been nailed,
A miraculous escape
for this idle fool,
should have been more wary
It could have ended it all.

I love it! The ryming is execlellent! You see! I like it so much till my spelling is....The pattern is right too! One word... WOWIES! I really wished I could compose this poem!

Thumbs up! :)

nice

I'm glad he lived. Good poem.

that's real good!
reminds me of my friend who died in a car accident..
this one's ending is better than the reality i knew!

WOW. Thank God he didn't die. LOL.