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Position:Home>Poetry> Bored poem =) rate please not my best work at all?Question:my alter ego I sit in math class While you fly to Rome I wait time for pass You sit in Paris, your home I eat the same Disgusting fast food Your lead to fame I’m in a bad mood You have the time The money the girls Im doing just fine In my same old world Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: my alter ego I sit in math class While you fly to Rome I wait time for pass You sit in Paris, your home I eat the same Disgusting fast food Your lead to fame I’m in a bad mood You have the time The money the girls Im doing just fine In my same old world Nice work! I guess your best to write according to your mood. So just keep it up..until you dig into your real best. The 10th and 12th line didnt match. Others r ok. Keep it up. |