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Question:my alter ego

I sit in math class
While you fly to Rome
I wait time for pass
You sit in Paris, your home

I eat the same
Disgusting fast food
Your lead to fame
I’m in a bad mood

You have the time
The money the girls
Im doing just fine
In my same old world


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: my alter ego

I sit in math class
While you fly to Rome
I wait time for pass
You sit in Paris, your home

I eat the same
Disgusting fast food
Your lead to fame
I’m in a bad mood

You have the time
The money the girls
Im doing just fine
In my same old world

Nice work!
I guess your best to write according to your mood. So just keep it up..until you dig into your real best.

The 10th and 12th line didnt match. Others r ok. Keep it up.