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Frankly, my eyes are Green
by TD Euwaite

I know that you have suffered through
So many words mundane
With potty jokes from artichokes
Goes vomit and migraines

If I stand by and don’t decry
The sin’s of average Joes
How will I know when genius flows
Unless I suffer pain…

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: *****
Frankly, my eyes are Green
by TD Euwaite

I know that you have suffered through
So many words mundane
With potty jokes from artichokes
Goes vomit and migraines

If I stand by and don’t decry
The sin’s of average Joes
How will I know when genius flows
Unless I suffer pain…

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I'm Spent


...and the swing goes forward always to return
poetic hearts have no room to burn
Oh, will she write thee, I do not know
T'was not my fight, no, not alone
I shall not suffer yet party in glee
So exhausted trying to make amends meet............

I'm spent

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Sorry I missed this one bro. I was out drinking last night. Hope you are having a great day! Report It

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