My new short poem, The Moon?

Question:Opinions?

The Moon.

Luminous moon
Enlighten the night
Twinkling stars
Glowing with light
Behind is the sun
Keeping it bright
Shine in darkness
It blazes alight

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Opinions?

The Moon.

Luminous moon
Enlighten the night
Twinkling stars
Glowing with light
Behind is the sun
Keeping it bright
Shine in darkness
It blazes alight

The moon- a favorite subject of mine , and you have written a very lovely poem about it. I love the form and rhyme, and it all flows well. You have said so much without a word wasted. Thank you.

I really liked the descriptiveness of this, I usually don't enjoy short-lined poems like this, but, this one I really loved! Its really rythmatic and moves along very well, bravo!