Poem, what do you think?

Question:I saw a love,
a love I had not seen,
in the dark,
in the past,
I reached for love,
and through the hour glass it slipped away from me,
I stand alone,
I hold my heart,
I comfort my solice,
and I weep.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I saw a love,
a love I had not seen,
in the dark,
in the past,
I reached for love,
and through the hour glass it slipped away from me,
I stand alone,
I hold my heart,
I comfort my solice,
and I weep.

that was really nice. it was beautiful

pretty good. i dont get the 5th line though.

its very good
keep it up

its really nice :)

nice poem