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Question:I'm on the brink
Arrow through heart
How could i think
We'd never part

Now i stand alone
With no one beside
I should have known
But I'm dying inside

Now I know that I sound
like I'm asking to much
But with no one around
Life really sucks

My heart is in half
My soul is in two
Why would you laugh
When I cry without you

I need to move on
I need to get real
We went on to long
You don't care how i feel

Your gone
Now its over
I wish you along
Because my life is over


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I'm on the brink
Arrow through heart
How could i think
We'd never part

Now i stand alone
With no one beside
I should have known
But I'm dying inside

Now I know that I sound
like I'm asking to much
But with no one around
Life really sucks

My heart is in half
My soul is in two
Why would you laugh
When I cry without you

I need to move on
I need to get real
We went on to long
You don't care how i feel

Your gone
Now its over
I wish you along
Because my life is over

Amazing
(for once im not critisizing or swearing at any one)