Dis a good poem.?

Question:When i die sho no pity
just send my soul to gangsta city
lay red flag across my chest.
and tell all the tru bloods i did my best

4 crips creeped behind me
popped me 5 times
guess i was repayed for all my crimes

im dead now not to fear my crew
because my my spirit remains here
and were blood thru and thru

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: When i die sho no pity
just send my soul to gangsta city
lay red flag across my chest.
and tell all the tru bloods i did my best

4 crips creeped behind me
popped me 5 times
guess i was repayed for all my crimes

im dead now not to fear my crew
because my my spirit remains here
and were blood thru and thru

I think it's really good.
I could totally hear it in a rap song or something.

Gangs are serious sh*t though so be careful; it sounds like you have some personal experience with it and that worries me.

Never explain your poetry!

By the way; it's a very good unfinished draft.