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Position:Home>Poetry> Does anyone have a suggestion for a word to use in this line?Question:In the fourth line it says "I am there", but I feel it should be "I am ______ there".....I just can not think of the word to put there! Anyone have any suggestions? Or any other suggestions for the poem, in general? Paris in my Dreams By: Me Beneath this speckled sky, of another place, I dream. As I close my eyes, I am there. This old yet modern city, the one of love and romance, runs vigorously through my veins, like the water in the Seine. I've not been there in the flesh and blood, But many a night, after all are asleep, I replace reality with imagination. I see the lovers dancing twirling hand in hand, beneath the subtle glow of the avenue lights. Mona's eyes stare back at me, as I ponder the story behind her cryptic smile. A drip of sweet smelling rain kisses my nose, as I look up to view the Tower's top, Only to find myself merely gazing at the stars. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: In the fourth line it says "I am there", but I feel it should be "I am ______ there".....I just can not think of the word to put there! Anyone have any suggestions? Or any other suggestions for the poem, in general? Paris in my Dreams By: Me Beneath this speckled sky, of another place, I dream. As I close my eyes, I am there. This old yet modern city, the one of love and romance, runs vigorously through my veins, like the water in the Seine. I've not been there in the flesh and blood, But many a night, after all are asleep, I replace reality with imagination. I see the lovers dancing twirling hand in hand, beneath the subtle glow of the avenue lights. Mona's eyes stare back at me, as I ponder the story behind her cryptic smile. A drip of sweet smelling rain kisses my nose, as I look up to view the Tower's top, Only to find myself merely gazing at the stars. I sought to be there... This is only a suggestion... BTW check out Rouxes' game... He is one of my contacts. i am ALMOST there? idk, maybe? Forever.... i am hanging there? maybe? =) Beneath the speckled sky, or another place, I dream. I close my eyes,I am almost there Beneath the speckled sky, or another place,I dream. As I close my eyes, I arrived there Beneath the speckled sky, or another place, I dream. As I close my eyes, I just got there I am there...always been there |