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Position:Home>Poetry> Gaasg love poem?Question:i was never tall dark and handsome so i was at a slight disadvantage until i got lots of $$$$ damaged women in my life damaged just like me it's an ugly world sex through all the misery go fast go slow and when i turn on the radio i remember different birds and words that were said and how that song played while i got some road head. silent butt deadly, frank Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i was never tall dark and handsome so i was at a slight disadvantage until i got lots of $$$$ damaged women in my life damaged just like me it's an ugly world sex through all the misery go fast go slow and when i turn on the radio i remember different birds and words that were said and how that song played while i got some road head. silent butt deadly, frank This is a good one Frank. Your work is always so descriptive with suck a sprinkling of words. I learn from you all the time, the art of 'silent but deadly.' ..... ;O)) thats weird... Quite a new play on the "silent but deadly" cliche -- take the cliche aspect away. The poem does not use cliche's, and it is strong, and heady. Good work. Frank, you are getting soft or censorship is wearing you down. This is a nice retro look, albeit with a lewd ending. Hell, I am even giving you a star. Take that to the loo. |