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Question:i was never tall dark and handsome
so i was at a slight disadvantage
until i got lots of $$$$

damaged women in my life
damaged just like me
it's an ugly world
sex through all the misery

go fast go slow
and when i turn on the
radio
i remember different
birds
and words that were said
and how that song played
while i got some road head.

silent butt deadly,

frank


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i was never tall dark and handsome
so i was at a slight disadvantage
until i got lots of $$$$

damaged women in my life
damaged just like me
it's an ugly world
sex through all the misery

go fast go slow
and when i turn on the
radio
i remember different
birds
and words that were said
and how that song played
while i got some road head.

silent butt deadly,

frank

This is a good one Frank. Your work is always so descriptive with suck a sprinkling of words. I learn from you all the time, the art of 'silent but deadly.' ..... ;O))

thats weird...

Quite a new play on the "silent but deadly" cliche -- take the cliche aspect away.

The poem does not use cliche's, and it is strong, and heady.

Good work.

Frank, you are getting soft or censorship is wearing you down. This is a nice retro look, albeit with a lewd ending. Hell, I am even giving you a star. Take that to the loo.