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Question:Can you write an acrostic/freestyle poem that reads:

"You Stopped Loving Me"


This is just a fun exercise. Thank you.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Can you write an acrostic/freestyle poem that reads:

"You Stopped Loving Me"


This is just a fun exercise. Thank you.

Yes you did!
Oh, how could you ever?
Underestimate my feelings like this

Stop, don't touch me
This very night is scorching enough
Our nights together have ended
Pretending is useless
Pausing for effect, out of style
Everlasting has been outlasted!
Deny it all you want
Liar! Filthy little liar!
Out there while I'm home!
Violating my trust
Inviting others to our bed
Get out!
My very heart is screaming murder!
Ever think of me when you climaxed?

Yearning
Or hoping is pointless.
Unloved I am.

Sour taste,
Tensed chest:
Only reminders of your presence.

Pierced my skin,
Pierced my smile,
Eternally left me tied.

Eleven months and eleven
Days, I'm afraid my
Love for you will never decay.

Obtuse and
Vacant your love is, and
I suffered for nothing.

Naked, just-born, fuzzy bird
Gasping for breath:
Me freshly reborn from death,

Excited to start living again.

EDIT: hah...it wasn't easy! Wow I'm the first :D
EDIT 2: oh sh.t I have an inessential line! Damn...

Years pass
Overlooking partner
Unthinkable seperation

Stained love
Tossed emotions
Obstructed words
Puzzling actions
Poor choices
Ending friendship
Dead hope

Lives parting
Owners revoke
Vanishing love
Internal remorse
No commnication
Gnashing teeth

Moving away
Eternity gone

Those eyes relish my stars
In them, the night is glorious
The blessings of a better soul.

They distract the immense astral eternity
And the enlighting serenity
The oppression of an age.

You stopped loving me.