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Position:Home>Poetry> Acrostic Freestyle Challenge ... for writers only?Question:Can you write an acrostic/freestyle poem that reads: "You Stopped Loving Me" This is just a fun exercise. Thank you. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Can you write an acrostic/freestyle poem that reads: "You Stopped Loving Me" This is just a fun exercise. Thank you. Yes you did! Oh, how could you ever? Underestimate my feelings like this Stop, don't touch me This very night is scorching enough Our nights together have ended Pretending is useless Pausing for effect, out of style Everlasting has been outlasted! Deny it all you want Liar! Filthy little liar! Out there while I'm home! Violating my trust Inviting others to our bed Get out! My very heart is screaming murder! Ever think of me when you climaxed? Yearning Or hoping is pointless. Unloved I am. Sour taste, Tensed chest: Only reminders of your presence. Pierced my skin, Pierced my smile, Eternally left me tied. Eleven months and eleven Days, I'm afraid my Love for you will never decay. Obtuse and Vacant your love is, and I suffered for nothing. Naked, just-born, fuzzy bird Gasping for breath: Me freshly reborn from death, Excited to start living again. EDIT: hah...it wasn't easy! Wow I'm the first :D EDIT 2: oh sh.t I have an inessential line! Damn... Years pass Overlooking partner Unthinkable seperation Stained love Tossed emotions Obstructed words Puzzling actions Poor choices Ending friendship Dead hope Lives parting Owners revoke Vanishing love Internal remorse No commnication Gnashing teeth Moving away Eternity gone Those eyes relish my stars In them, the night is glorious The blessings of a better soul. They distract the immense astral eternity And the enlighting serenity The oppression of an age. You stopped loving me. |