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Question:Can you write a Haiku or few the topic ... An Open Apology


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i kneel before you
heart heavy with sorrow
forgive me my love

sorry for the eclipse
the darkness i put you through
take my light its yours


allow my words to spill
so perhaps this wound to heal
I am so sorry

For the pain you feel
I sorrowfully kneel, saying
"Will you forgive me?"

It was in error
That I put foot-into-mouth
I can't take that back

Look into my eyes
Know that I did not mean it
This I ask of you

Do you want me to write a haiku starting with an Open Apology. Your question is not very clear. or few the topic?

I did not mean it.
It just popped out of my mouth.
I'll pop it back in.

Did I dent your car
When you broke my neck and spine?
Did I scratch the paint?

Haiku to the man with the black and blue foot.

Oh, I dropped that brick!
I am devastated now!
I'll go get some ice!

The wind blows through me
Your long, deep, hurt, hateful glance:
Transparent I am.

My mistake is vile.
I ask for apology:
Will you accept it?

My heart is frozen
Your apologies wither
And die on the vine

Oceans of sorrow
Flood all my waking moments
Will you forgive me?

You're sorry AGAIN!!?
Apology accepted!
(for all it is worth!)



You made my life Hell,
With your womanizing ways!
NOT sorry your dead!! (at the grave of her husband, lol!)