Heres a new poem... its not very good but it came to mind =)?

Question:new poem
im 13 so dont rate as one of those people who has spent there whole life on poetry so yeah please give me input

You act like a maze
You act like a game
You’re fuzzy and hazed
And yet you get the fame

You dance in the rain
You start the trend
Others just feel pain
And they just get wet

You’re the rainstorm
Pouring down on me
Your heart can’t be torn
No heart exists so it seems

The lightning bolt hits
Right where I stand
Sparks start to emit
But not as planned

i dont know how
to finish this rhyme
but for right now
i dont have the time

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: new poem
im 13 so dont rate as one of those people who has spent there whole life on poetry so yeah please give me input

You act like a maze
You act like a game
You’re fuzzy and hazed
And yet you get the fame

You dance in the rain
You start the trend
Others just feel pain
And they just get wet

You’re the rainstorm
Pouring down on me
Your heart can’t be torn
No heart exists so it seems

The lightning bolt hits
Right where I stand
Sparks start to emit
But not as planned

i dont know how
to finish this rhyme
but for right now
i dont have the time

Wow dude,
I don't know what to say.
It was ok, pretty harsh to whoever it was for...
Nice ending though

my facorite part was the end because i knew the torture was over