For Lissa. I hope everyone like this. Please critique this..?

Question:"dreams"

You released my heart,
showed me how to see.
Woke me to the dawn,
in the eastern early sky.

On my face the breeze,
so gentle and so mild.
I looked to the sky,
certain I could glide.

Take my shaking hand,
show me the right way.
Deep inside your eyes,
where I'd like to stay.

High up in the sky,
where birds always sing.
This my own cloud tonight,
let my dreams begin.

When the sunset comes,
we will watch the stars.
Do not close your eyes,
We have come too far.

Please my friend I need,
for you just to see.
Your life and my own,
forever we will be.

I still see the skies,
deep inside your eyes.
Your beautiful life,
look into my eyes.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "dreams"

You released my heart,
showed me how to see.
Woke me to the dawn,
in the eastern early sky.

On my face the breeze,
so gentle and so mild.
I looked to the sky,
certain I could glide.

Take my shaking hand,
show me the right way.
Deep inside your eyes,
where I'd like to stay.

High up in the sky,
where birds always sing.
This my own cloud tonight,
let my dreams begin.

When the sunset comes,
we will watch the stars.
Do not close your eyes,
We have come too far.

Please my friend I need,
for you just to see.
Your life and my own,
forever we will be.

I still see the skies,
deep inside your eyes.
Your beautiful life,
look into my eyes.

its the best you've written in a while in my opinion.. the rythum is excelent!! the topic is beautiful, and well portrayed and the subject of the poem is even better!! xoxoxo breath Steve

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awwwww that is soooooo sweet and romantic!!!!!! :D

sounds really good man!

Are you gay or is it just your poem?