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Position:Home>Poetry> Have you ever had a silent cure?Question:She hears his groans And immediately She knows he is in misery Used to the sound She gently places her right hand On his left shoulder Without looking he knows She is once again by his side He exhales As she moves her hand To his back As he lets on more breath go A smile walks across his face And the nurse Has once again performed Her miraculous silent healing Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: She hears his groans And immediately She knows he is in misery Used to the sound She gently places her right hand On his left shoulder Without looking he knows She is once again by his side He exhales As she moves her hand To his back As he lets on more breath go A smile walks across his face And the nurse Has once again performed Her miraculous silent healing I once had a good friend who was about to go and make a very important speech. She had headaches almost all her young-adult life and one was ailing her at that moment, right before a very important part in her life. I never told her this but I drew the pain out by drawing the energies to myself. She said the headache did not bother her during her speech and she has not had them since... but I have. I do not know why, but this poem reminded me of that. You are raising memories from my past ans\d I think I like it... Your poetry has always had a big effect on me and my memories! He got Gas hasn't he? You and your Gas.. *Shakes Head* Didn't understand this Line "As he lets on more breath go" Edit Thanks Jeff it makes sense now. it should read like this "As he takes a breath he lets ONE more go A smile walks across his face" Yep, that sounds like biscuits The only thing I am touching this with is sutures. St Therese is blushing. Edit: Fix you typos so on and one don't detract! Gideon, 'on' should be 'one.' That guy he's got no heart or class. This is about the power of love, and not about passing gas. I have them all the time thats beautiful |