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Question:She hears his groans
And immediately
She knows he is in misery
Used to the sound
She gently places her right hand
On his left shoulder
Without looking he knows
She is once again by his side
He exhales
As she moves her hand
To his back
As he lets on more breath go
A smile walks across his face
And the nurse
Has once again performed
Her miraculous silent healing


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: She hears his groans
And immediately
She knows he is in misery
Used to the sound
She gently places her right hand
On his left shoulder
Without looking he knows
She is once again by his side
He exhales
As she moves her hand
To his back
As he lets on more breath go
A smile walks across his face
And the nurse
Has once again performed
Her miraculous silent healing

I once had a good friend who was about to go and make a very important speech.
She had headaches almost all her young-adult life and one was ailing her at that moment, right before a very important part in her life.
I never told her this but I drew the pain out by drawing the energies to myself.
She said the headache did not bother her during her speech and she has not had them since... but I have.
I do not know why, but this poem reminded me of that. You are raising memories from my past ans\d I think I like it...
Your poetry has always had a big effect on me and my memories!

He got Gas hasn't he? You and your Gas.. *Shakes Head*
Didn't understand this Line

"As he lets on more breath go"

Edit
Thanks Jeff it makes sense now. it should read like this

"As he takes a breath he lets ONE more go
A smile walks across his face"

Yep, that sounds like biscuits

The only thing I am touching this with is sutures. St Therese is blushing. Edit: Fix you typos so on and one don't detract!

Gideon, 'on' should be 'one.'
That guy he's got no heart or class.
This is about the power of love, and not about passing gas.

I have them all the time

thats beautiful