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Who’s Driving
by TD Euwaite

Shag cut brunette
That one, she’s got the beat
She shakes all over on the one
The dance in her’s unusual
Musical,
Magical, she twirls

I hold her locked in tight
On our counterclockwise flight
Across the crowded floor
Four corners, door to door
Along the downbeat borders

She whips hear head and swirls
And that wild brown mop
Flips wooly
She bullies me with that thick, coarse hair
We run, I hold on, she follows
Stalking me in 3/4 time

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: *****
Who’s Driving
by TD Euwaite

Shag cut brunette
That one, she’s got the beat
She shakes all over on the one
The dance in her’s unusual
Musical,
Magical, she twirls

I hold her locked in tight
On our counterclockwise flight
Across the crowded floor
Four corners, door to door
Along the downbeat borders

She whips hear head and swirls
And that wild brown mop
Flips wooly
She bullies me with that thick, coarse hair
We run, I hold on, she follows
Stalking me in 3/4 time

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Bravo. This took me there. "Along the downbeat borders" and "We run, I hold on, she follows" -- yeah!

No, not at all.

Perhaps, those were indeed...the days.

I can hear "ABBA" playing in the background! :)

Sounds like fun...let's all get together and do that!

The last time I danced with
someone
I thought I would wrestle with the
person.
I can see you are at a dance
I can see you have the techniques
haven't lost touch according to your poem.

I most certainly do

wow, this takes me back

To take the plunge
into the dance
Come on now
Just take a chance
If you were to find
That joy was near
the dance my guide
you far from here
here where all
is dark and drab
so to the wall
just glide and grab
a boy a girl
one of your choosing
if you don't
it's you who's loosing

I am always wishing to dance rather then sit and fall into the darkness of thought, which, unfortunately, I always am... this helped me out, if not for just a brief moment and for that, I thank you.

By the way, you should go play Rouxes' game...

I really loved this poem it's a really cool poem.

With the guy of my dreams, yeah. I'm not into girls as I am one. I'd put the guy in the poem and it would do me.