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Position:Home>Poetry> I have a poem i already posted it i just want summore input?Question:im 13 this is how it goes Ode to death An awful pain Ode to death All for fame? Ode to death Such a sin Ode to death How can you win? Ode to the doomed Who shall life for them end Ode to the doomed Who soon will be dead Ode to the doomed Who can’t decide Ode to the doomed Who turn to suicide Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: im 13 this is how it goes Ode to death An awful pain Ode to death All for fame? Ode to death Such a sin Ode to death How can you win? Ode to the doomed Who shall life for them end Ode to the doomed Who soon will be dead Ode to the doomed Who can’t decide Ode to the doomed Who turn to suicide I like your style, kid. Seems like my own. Nice job, great poem. Keep writing your heart. Hey! Im 13 too! I like how you keep building on and the end you have a result. Maybe you can lengthen it out more. sounds like some one depressed wrote this. and it doesnt make alot of sense. id stick with a different hobby |