Comment on this short poem please?

Question:teen angst

teen angst
writes the poem on this page
teen angst
is another cloudy day

it's a disease
parents don't understand
it's a disease
the only cure is poetry

it's anger
at the world
it's anger
at yourself

teen angst
i hate the world
teen angst
i'm all alone

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: teen angst

teen angst
writes the poem on this page
teen angst
is another cloudy day

it's a disease
parents don't understand
it's a disease
the only cure is poetry

it's anger
at the world
it's anger
at yourself

teen angst
i hate the world
teen angst
i'm all alone

Wow...the poem is short/simple and yet so strong because it's so real and incredibly easy to relate to. This topic isn't one like love where it is easy to write. Poetry was my escape, my paper was the one thing I could talk to. It's great.

Drowning, was also well written, drowning is something so many feel, nice to see it actually written down. I loved the line about not caring about what it takes to fall asleep..powerful. I love your writing style. Keep it up, i'd love to read more. Check out my page, i'd love to work with you.

sad, but speaks the truth about a lot of teen lives. i like it.

Teen Angst...described as a disease...i like the connection.I can well remember my own Teen angst even though it was many years ago. I still have a lot of the anger, though.some things never change.

Teen angst,
This is a nice poem
I detect some sadness
because your parents say its a
disease
It is not, it is art,
The trouble with people who say things like this
is their attitude,
and some people can write poetry
others can't
don't let other people sway you.

WOW, have been there my friend, I loved both of these writes, so innocent yet, abrupt, it truly pains my heart at the thought that thoughts like these actually go through some heads..

These are truly gut wrenching, well done <3!