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Question:I can't help but think that you're going to leave me
Don't tell me you won't if your heart doesn't feel it
I can't stand more heartbreak,
I don't want to take that chance,

Every night I think about it,
What should I do?
What should I say to you,
to make you understand that,
My heart has been damaged before
It's more than an "I Love You" can fix anymore

I need more than the security of your words.
I need your heart to tell me,
to tell me what you really feel inside,
to tell me that you won't be just like him,

You can say you love me,
You can preach to me your words,
The only thing I want to see though,
Is an action

An action that will show me your heart,
that will show me your soul,

That's all I ask,
in return for heart,
if you can do that,
my heart is yours




(Is this one better than the last.? Opinions please.)


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I can't help but think that you're going to leave me
Don't tell me you won't if your heart doesn't feel it
I can't stand more heartbreak,
I don't want to take that chance,

Every night I think about it,
What should I do?
What should I say to you,
to make you understand that,
My heart has been damaged before
It's more than an "I Love You" can fix anymore

I need more than the security of your words.
I need your heart to tell me,
to tell me what you really feel inside,
to tell me that you won't be just like him,

You can say you love me,
You can preach to me your words,
The only thing I want to see though,
Is an action

An action that will show me your heart,
that will show me your soul,

That's all I ask,
in return for heart,
if you can do that,
my heart is yours




(Is this one better than the last.? Opinions please.)

A very well done plea for love. I didn't read the last one but this one is very good.

yes. its beautiful

Thats a very nice poem