When you've been hurt, do you ever feel like this? Can you let him go and wa

Question:What Else To Do?

What else can I give to make you see
that I have given you all of me?
Alas, my love, what is our fate?
You have been restless here of late.
I see you rise and pace about
as if you want to hurry out.
You're not content with one such as I
so leave me and don't waste a sad good-bye.
I loose the chains that held your heart
tight to mine, now they part.
LIke a wild horse that fights the rope
now you're gone, I have no hope
that you'll ever come back to stay.
I've lost the sun that lit my day.
Tears, they come and tears they go.
My broken heart may never know
to love someone who won't love you.
Tomorrow is another day too.
Perhaps there's a love in store for me.
I'll wait I guess and then just see.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: What Else To Do?

What else can I give to make you see
that I have given you all of me?
Alas, my love, what is our fate?
You have been restless here of late.
I see you rise and pace about
as if you want to hurry out.
You're not content with one such as I
so leave me and don't waste a sad good-bye.
I loose the chains that held your heart
tight to mine, now they part.
LIke a wild horse that fights the rope
now you're gone, I have no hope
that you'll ever come back to stay.
I've lost the sun that lit my day.
Tears, they come and tears they go.
My broken heart may never know
to love someone who won't love you.
Tomorrow is another day too.
Perhaps there's a love in store for me.
I'll wait I guess and then just see.

when i read this i felt what you felt..i was connected..it was really good..
a tip:: where it says like a wild horse that fights the rope
now you're gone, i have no hope

(the next line should partain to something else like all the other lines)

i.e:: your gone: never to stay
for i've lost the sun that lit my day

really great:: :) ur a very good writer..

edit: yes ive have felt this way. it takes awhile but eventually time will help u get over it..i hope u get through it..good luck!

:D

Severing those ties is never easy...but just around the corner...
awaits a new adventure!
To quote Howard Carter "Yes, wonderful things!"

I am working on letting go right now.

Wonderful poem!

Well many people if not all have such experiences.
when somebody u love and he leaves u alone
then dont give place to tears
not even to hatred against him
dont wait for another love
but try to love yourself and love those who expect it from u
dont ever go by fear and pain
be happy and you will surely gain
the balm of love and the music of silence
the fruits of loving ur self
why should you care for one who does not care
i love you just look here
i am ur love i m so fair
you are my part, the most dear!

like it :)

This is a wonderful poem about a sorrowful situation, one that I can relate to very well. There is always hope, and only you can create the new reality of a new love by keeping your heart and mind open to all of the possibilities. Thank you.