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Question:just because im quiet
doesnt mean i........
and doesnt mean i....
but it does mean ......

just because i get good grades
doesnt mean i......
and doesnt mean i....
but it does mean....
fill in the blanks please and thanks


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: just because im quiet
doesnt mean i........
and doesnt mean i....
but it does mean ......

just because i get good grades
doesnt mean i......
and doesnt mean i....
but it does mean....
fill in the blanks please and thanks

just because im quiet
doesnt mean im weird
and doesnt mean im shy
but it does mean im scared to show my realself.

just because i get good grades
doesnt mean im a teachers pet
and doesnt mean i dont have a life
but it does mean i care; unlike others

depends what you want the poem to be about. I take it it's some kind of a love poem? Or a desperation poem? Do you want it to rhyme? Oh well, here goes:

Just because I'm quiet
Doesn't mean I'm depressed
Doesn't mean I'm difficult
But it does mean I have so much more to say.

Just because I get good grades
Doesn't mean I'm a suck up
Doesn't mean I'm lifeless
But it does mean I can think for myself.

I know it's not very good, but I hope that helps! :]

Just because I'm quiet
dosen't mean that I can't speak.
Just because I'm quiet
dosen't mean that I am sad.
I'm quiet 'cause I'm a thinker.
I'm quiet, that's not bad.
It means that when I speak
my words are chosen well.
It means that I'm just finding
something worthy to tell.

Just because I get good grades
it dosen't mean I'm wise.
Just because I get good grades
it dosen't mean I'm better.
It means I pay attention
to every word and letter.

I'm not kidding here...take out the "fill in the blanks..." line and leave the rest alone. The unnamed values make it a brilliant piece. You tell us how quiet your are...then demostrate your quietness with the long blank pauses. TD

I like it just the way it is. Just because you're quiet.

I enjoyed the other responsive poems as well.