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Position:Home>Poetry> Help me with this poem please?Question:just because im quiet doesnt mean i........ and doesnt mean i.... but it does mean ...... just because i get good grades doesnt mean i...... and doesnt mean i.... but it does mean.... fill in the blanks please and thanks Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: just because im quiet doesnt mean i........ and doesnt mean i.... but it does mean ...... just because i get good grades doesnt mean i...... and doesnt mean i.... but it does mean.... fill in the blanks please and thanks just because im quiet doesnt mean im weird and doesnt mean im shy but it does mean im scared to show my realself. just because i get good grades doesnt mean im a teachers pet and doesnt mean i dont have a life but it does mean i care; unlike others depends what you want the poem to be about. I take it it's some kind of a love poem? Or a desperation poem? Do you want it to rhyme? Oh well, here goes: Just because I'm quiet Doesn't mean I'm depressed Doesn't mean I'm difficult But it does mean I have so much more to say. Just because I get good grades Doesn't mean I'm a suck up Doesn't mean I'm lifeless But it does mean I can think for myself. I know it's not very good, but I hope that helps! :] Just because I'm quiet dosen't mean that I can't speak. Just because I'm quiet dosen't mean that I am sad. I'm quiet 'cause I'm a thinker. I'm quiet, that's not bad. It means that when I speak my words are chosen well. It means that I'm just finding something worthy to tell. Just because I get good grades it dosen't mean I'm wise. Just because I get good grades it dosen't mean I'm better. It means I pay attention to every word and letter. I'm not kidding here...take out the "fill in the blanks..." line and leave the rest alone. The unnamed values make it a brilliant piece. You tell us how quiet your are...then demostrate your quietness with the long blank pauses. TD I like it just the way it is. Just because you're quiet. I enjoyed the other responsive poems as well. |