Could someone please beautify this poem?

Question:Please 'beautify' my English, make it sweet and elegant, using metaphor or something like that. I'm not native in English and I need this poem for the yearbook.

1. We are sure... we would be successful in the future
2. Though there will be such distance lie between us
3. our heart will still unite
4. Shortly, we may be going our own separate ways,
5. but remember that we shall always be there to support you
6. And when we have reached the time of our lives,
7. know that there will always be light in the darkness
8. A light that is warming like a smile
9. a light that is sparkling like our friendship
10. And when we meet again, we shall smile and share our experience
11. I bid you farewell, friends. See you in the future. Let our memories alive foreve

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Please 'beautify' my English, make it sweet and elegant, using metaphor or something like that. I'm not native in English and I need this poem for the yearbook.

1. We are sure... we would be successful in the future
2. Though there will be such distance lie between us
3. our heart will still unite
4. Shortly, we may be going our own separate ways,
5. but remember that we shall always be there to support you
6. And when we have reached the time of our lives,
7. know that there will always be light in the darkness
8. A light that is warming like a smile
9. a light that is sparkling like our friendship
10. And when we meet again, we shall smile and share our experience
11. I bid you farewell, friends. See you in the future. Let our memories alive foreve

Nice poem... If i'm changing a lot of your poem then please forgive me...

Our future is bound to bring success
Though we'll be far away, I confess.
Our heart will always unite,
No matter that we used to fight.

Soon we'll be going our own ways
Thinking of the good old days
But we'll always be there for each other
We've been like sisters and brothers.

And when we've reached the time of or lives
You know that in the darkness, a light will arrive
A light that warms like a simile
A light that shows that our friendship was worthwhile

And when we meet again,
We'll always think of when
No matter in what weather
We always used to be together.

Now I bid you farewell
What will happen, time will tell
I hope that I have used this pen
To be a charm that we will meet again.

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Ok, I;ve used the essence of your poem to make it into a poem that my classmates and teachers and relatives would like.

It rhymes and although not every poem rhymes, I think that this will be sort of a way that you and your friend will cherish your memories FOREVER.

Hope I helped!!!

Slowly time passes as we grow farther and farther apart
Time ripping at the bond that connects us all
Our hearts beat together, breathing, living and loving in unity.
Hearts torn as the past sails away, goodbye!
But it's not the end, we will meet yet again
And this time we will know the world and it's secrets,
We'll be wiser, and somehow we will remain the same
Because across the world are hearts will beat in unity
Our love for one another will spread, grow and remain etched in out hearts

I couldn't think of the rest but i hope that gets you rolling!! You might want to add some punctuation cause if you didn't notice i really don't use any. GOOD LUCK!

So long, my stars
We'll be far between and scattered around
But we'll think of each other and what we've found
And we'll cluster together again

Soon we'll leave for our own searches
But we can guide each other all the way
And when we have reached the time of our lives
Or want to cry, know there is a light
A light warming like a smile
Each star will help you through life's trials

And one day we'll find our dreams
We'll sit down, smile and share the news
Until then my friends, this is a parting
It's not the end- life's only starting!