Poem i wrote.?

Question:Dresses Don't Fix Disasters.

She bought a dress of red and white
and when she wore it, it was a beautiful sight
the prettiest girl some had ever seen
the compliments from all but one, made her gleam
but dresses don't fix disasters
dresses don't create happily ever after
they can't make him love her like he did before
and fix her heart, that is so sore
it can't make him think she's the one for me
or i shouldn't have let her go, now i see
but still her hopes rest
in this little dress, this one night, this one test
all she knows is that her heart aches for him
all she knows is that she wants him again
yet the truth still remains, sad but true
dresses don't fix disasters
not matter how much she wants them to.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Dresses Don't Fix Disasters.

She bought a dress of red and white
and when she wore it, it was a beautiful sight
the prettiest girl some had ever seen
the compliments from all but one, made her gleam
but dresses don't fix disasters
dresses don't create happily ever after
they can't make him love her like he did before
and fix her heart, that is so sore
it can't make him think she's the one for me
or i shouldn't have let her go, now i see
but still her hopes rest
in this little dress, this one night, this one test
all she knows is that her heart aches for him
all she knows is that she wants him again
yet the truth still remains, sad but true
dresses don't fix disasters
not matter how much she wants them to.

This does show poetic talent. I hardly ever make it to the end of a broken heart poem. They are usually just the same old thing. Yours is a good job, with some solid metaphors and statements. "but dresses don't fix disasters" is a very good line. TD

It's pretty good, but the rhyming is a tad messy. I still like it.

jesus is the answer.

Just kidding...what was the question again?

waaaaaaaaaah!!

Thats rich! love your creativity ! Elle is being silly..she just didnt read the rythm right and go with the flow of it..Its a great poem!

i normally hate poems

but i somewhat like what this one is about and how you start it off about the dress and how you end it.

tastefully done

could be modified a bit

but i thinks its exceptional.

A bit too "telly." Remember: show; don't tell.

i like it a lot

C-... for trying