A morbid poem. very sad today. How do u like this.?

Question:"resolution"

It is true the time has come,
I see the bitter end.
Things I've seen and I've done,
the end to all my days.

Misery hangs heavy,
on the wings of fallen saints.
Witness these end of days,
I commit myself to rage.

Kingdoms rise and fall,
buried in the sands of time.
I don't believe in all I see,
but every word I ever heard.

I am not the man I was,
I know I'll die alone.
I wish I could see myself,
the way that others do.

If remembered as a loser,
I leave with a bow and profane kiss.
Speak of honor and of trust,
All I left a pinkish mist.

Time is running out,
A lesson never learned.
A violent introduction,
to the risk of absolution.

My honesty is painful,
and anger is refined.
brought this all upon myself,
regret that has no end.

I commit my final breaths,
to the walking dead,
I will never be reborn,
with a bullet in my head.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "resolution"

It is true the time has come,
I see the bitter end.
Things I've seen and I've done,
the end to all my days.

Misery hangs heavy,
on the wings of fallen saints.
Witness these end of days,
I commit myself to rage.

Kingdoms rise and fall,
buried in the sands of time.
I don't believe in all I see,
but every word I ever heard.

I am not the man I was,
I know I'll die alone.
I wish I could see myself,
the way that others do.

If remembered as a loser,
I leave with a bow and profane kiss.
Speak of honor and of trust,
All I left a pinkish mist.

Time is running out,
A lesson never learned.
A violent introduction,
to the risk of absolution.

My honesty is painful,
and anger is refined.
brought this all upon myself,
regret that has no end.

I commit my final breaths,
to the walking dead,
I will never be reborn,
with a bullet in my head.

Besides the very heaviness of the entire poem , two things I really like: the term "profane kiss" and the reference to not believing your eyes because of the words instead of the opposite which is cliche. I love turning a quote upside down or backwards or inside out and exposing it as hypocrisy and you do that often- quite well.
cool. more more more more more

That's amazing!!! I love it! It's a little strange that some stanzas rhyme & others don't tho. I suggest rewording some of it 2 make the whole thing rhyme... becausei love the ending & it rhymes so DON'T CHANGE THAT!!!!

Feeling sad, try this go out and buy a whore. You'll feel even worse afterwards.

what would make you feel like this
has something come undone
what if the bullets a miss?
then wouldn't you feel dumb?

try to understand
there is a price you pay
when you choose to leave this land
thats just lifes way.

only god can help you through this
that's all that i can say
except maybe you would feel better if you stopped and
prayed

I could feel your emotion in the poem.. I agree that it needs some more work, but it's really good already. Keep it up.. get it out.. I know how much it helps..

I am sorry you are so sad today. The poem reflects this poigantly with deep emotion.

i know how you feel.

Slightly reminiscent of your poems of old. Are you getting back to the old form, so I will have several layers to pick through to get to the real poem? I most certainly hope so. I have missed those poems. This one is somewhat, but the layers aren't thick enough to hide anything, but it is good none the less. Keep writing, it will keep you going my friend.