Do you like this poem to start a poetry journal with?

Question:Originality is a quality the stars admire
as they only shine down on those not the same.
True self and true harmony twinkling in brightness,
the beauty of near pearl laying upon night.
If eyes could only see the heart,
the life that lay inside it..
the stars would shine on all.
Yes, I am different, as you may point out.
Obsession with science..the clicking of typing,
and penmanship's beauty...
swirling about.
Yes, I am not you.. not like you..
and you believe that is strange.
The stars beg to differ.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Originality is a quality the stars admire
as they only shine down on those not the same.
True self and true harmony twinkling in brightness,
the beauty of near pearl laying upon night.
If eyes could only see the heart,
the life that lay inside it..
the stars would shine on all.
Yes, I am different, as you may point out.
Obsession with science..the clicking of typing,
and penmanship's beauty...
swirling about.
Yes, I am not you.. not like you..
and you believe that is strange.
The stars beg to differ.

i love that. its so inspirational and creative. great job!

i think its really good definitley start a journal you have a talent =)