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Position:Home>Poetry> Is this poem good please answer!!!!!?Question:In my dark and stormy life you came in and made it bright and showed me what love was like. But then as the days passed I soon realized it wouldn't last my heart resembled a broken glass. the peices of my heart were lost i knew right then nothing could cost more than the pain you caused my heart. tm how would you change it please answer Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: In my dark and stormy life you came in and made it bright and showed me what love was like. But then as the days passed I soon realized it wouldn't last my heart resembled a broken glass. the peices of my heart were lost i knew right then nothing could cost more than the pain you caused my heart. tm how would you change it please answer This poem does what any good writing does - it reflects deep emotion. You don't need anyone's approval. If you are questioning whether or not you have expressed your emotions well; yes. If you are truly an aspiring poet I would suggest that you not restrict yourself to rhyming - it can limit your expression. Good luck and God bless. No, you do not need anyone's approval, but we all need to learn a lot more about poetry. We all do. Rhyming well does not limit expression. Expression is limited when we jot down a few words, pat ourselves on the back and call it a poem. Report It * You must be logged into Answers to add comments. Sign in or Register. Other Answers (4) |